Lightning 3d Render Wallpaper

First attempt at making a 3D Render.

I used XNALara for the pose, and then imported it into 3DS Max, then finished off in Photoshop. 

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I would love any help to improve my rendering, i only started using 3ds max yesterday so i'm very new to it. Things may need explain alot ^^